Words: 412 to revise Chapter 6 of Shades of Grey

Crits:
1 for Alison Scheidler's "the Guardian"
1 for Luke Kendall's "Leeth, chapter 4"

Wrote some thank you notes for crits tonight. I figured that'd be a good, healthy idea. Especially since I still owe for those crits. I'm working my way through the crits I owe, trying to get all caught up as the crit marathon progresses.